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my friend.

death come slowly,
and bring me pain.
creep up close and,
say my name.

come to me,
when im awake.
come and take me,
slowly away.

make me hurt,
until i cry.
rip apart,
my insides.

cause me trouble,
and don't be swift.
i want to hurt,
i need no bliss.

hell waits for me,
ill go there swift.
burn my soul,
i will not resist.

i need no warning,
need no time.
come and claim me,
oh friend of mine

thinking of more lines for it some help would be much needed and it would make me a little less emo, wait probly not....

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