My eyes stir beneath her wings
fluttering its tourniquets into my strings
and I kiss the last despair
unto her chestnut spiderwebs
dangling sweetly in black maire.
We hold each other - mother, sister;
lost within our bleak battlement.
Author notes
Prompt: http://valentinakallias.deviantart.com/art/Silenced-128849606
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Wow is right! What a great take on the prompt! And what a complicated relationship you weave too ... as all such are!
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Wow. This is amazing. I love what you did with the prompt; its brilliant.
{Please put the link to the picture in your AN. Thank-you.) -
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(links been added. xD)
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I ♥ your icon btw. L=♥
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Thanks. (:
He's my favorite character from Death Note.
Shame he had to die. ): -
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He is my favorite too. I stopped watching it after he died, cause it made me mad. xD
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I stopped reading the manga soon after he died.
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Nope. lol.
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I want too so badly, and I also want to see the L: Change the World. lol
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Haha. I have never heard of these. @_@ -cough- I feel so left out. xD
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lol Don't feel bad. I only found out about them from a friend recently.
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Ah. lol. Okay.
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