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Mahout trust

The heart of collosal beasts aren;t won with bones
nor strength in the untamed hands of another,
but each fidgeting day falling likes stones
is enough than the use of force to gather
the trust of crazy beasts soon to become
wandering pets with hearts listening quick
to it owner's pleasant voice when he hum
or clasp his hands without a single stick.
The beast is a lover of unreserved trust
and heartless it is when tutor comes as first.

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  • Wisdom 1
    July 9
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    the elephant image

    the great imagery of this poem was drawn from the at of taming an elephant-collosally seen as tudious.