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My Heart Sanding Away

~MY HEART WILL SAND AWAY~

Maybe you know
You made me glow.

How you did it,
Even you won't admit.
And now, you're leaving,
Really to you,
This is relieving.

~MY HEART IS SANDING AWAY~

So like you to do this
And I can't believe this I miss.
No, you hided from me and
Ditched me firsthand;
I'll never understand.
Now, I'm going away,
Going from this violent fray.

And even now, you won't explain
Why you don't have a brain
And a heart.
Yet, it all makes sense.

~MY HEART ALREADY SANDED AWAY~

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  • pumpykin
    September 6

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    A bittersweet, sad right. I like the rhyme scheme, it has a nice flow to it And I love the title.

    "Maybe you know
    You made me glow."

    That first part is especially beautiful


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 11

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    A raw and sad piece of poetry
    that spoke so much
    the feelings are strong and powerful
    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie


  • Sky Princess
    July 9
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    wow, this is hecka sad lezbo!!! and awsomely written!! good job!! *cheering*


    • xXxCaipirinhaxXx
      July 9
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      thank you, ky! i lovers you, my cousin and lezbo! if you check out the contest, you can see the prompt.