Its been my hardest year,
i almost didnt make it
how did i manage?
well i just had to fake it
I just faked a smile
pretended like i care
its a wonder they didnt notice
the desolation of my stare
the hollowed out eyes
always brimming with tears
they seemed to betray
the entirety of my fears
What hides behind them
the ghosts of my past
they tripped me hard
now i'm falling fast
falling towards emotional tumoil
I'm spiraling out of control
feeling more ominous than
the darkest of black holes
I'm losing control
I'm losing control....
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erm... since i got some nice feedback i decided to post another.....
What did you think?
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Thanks you guys! I was really convinced my poems sucked but since i have posted them on here i've had nothing but good feedback
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i know what that feels like.
having to fake it,even when your crying.
i have to pretend im fine and smile,but i feel
dead inside.keep writing.♥ -
Really Good. I can relate completley. for me to it has been the hardest year for me.. i almost didnt make it. great poem./
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Nice emo....tional content, lol. Really, it was heartfelt it seems. I'm not a fan of the simple abab rhyme scheme myself, maybe you should try some new ones. Keep at it.
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