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Missing Bunny

My bunny is my best friend

I love him oh so much
He is the one I always want
to be with
and to touch


My wake's just not the same
without him there to call my name


To snuggle a pillow
and not my fellow
is just a crying shame..........


Sooooo

when it comes Monday
the day after Sunday


expect a long snuggle my honey


for your bunny
is waiting for you

Author notes

Ken's Mom passed away, and we didn't have the money for both of us to go to Texas, so I'm missing him and decided to write this to him.

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  • rutlandxyz
    1 day ago
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    Light touch

    papers over the grief... I'm sure I couldn't possibly understand this approach to feeling, or longing... but I'll try to catch up... some day
    rut


  • leo2
    July 10

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    My heartfelt condolences go out to you and Ken. I know the pain of losing of loved one and hope the good Lord can send you comfort and strength in this time of grief.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • emmataylor
    July 9
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    Heart warming, I feel your longing x

  • Sarge
    July 9
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    Ahhhwww, that is really good, and a well crafted poem.


  • greekmask
    July 9

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    What a nice poem.
    Don't you just love how you can say alot in just a few words?!Simplicity is the key word. It goes straight to the point.That's what i like.

  • awww sweet! its cute i like it. great write.

    ~Divine~

  • Really very cute.
    And the reason you wrote it for makes it even more beautiful.
    Nice write.
    -Swati

  • aw. I like how you wrote this. it's kind of cute in a way... but the reason isn't so cute. You did a very nice job writing this, keep up your good work.

    TwiztidMaggot

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