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Mr McCap

Mr McCap with his nose in a book
never did give anything a look
and the story is told
on a day that was cold
he fell right off a cliff round a nook.

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My first ever limerick inspired by a picture drawn by an artist for a text book I'm working on. I really loved it...thought it was funny and had to be put down in writing!

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  • BeachBum1
    July 14, 2009
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    this is cheeky i like

  • Willowbark
    July 10, 2009
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    I like it! Always had trouble with limericks. But this flows very well. Great going, Sci!


    • Sci
      July 12, 2009
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      heheheh...thanks!....'tis my very first one!