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soul cleaning

we finger-painted
the past away -

revision healed
our open wounds
better than any
family practitioner.

the star path is now clear -

black holes
swallowed planet dust
like dead skin.

Author notes

Thank you Diana for writing this with me

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  • Odds and Ends
    July 9

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    i freaking love this piece. You know that already. just beginning to end... -sigh- i need to learn to wrote like this again!