"You brought a snack" - Yes
A tracker of the worst kind
Tracking her, smelling
Can't fool him, can't distract him
Can't run, can't fight, and can't hide.
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5,7,5,7,7 
My fave villian of the moment is James from Twilight, aka Cam Gigandet
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- Favorite villan,from books,games,movies,t.v.shows,anime..whatever. by Sarin Darktree.
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This reminded me of a killer trained to hunt and kill.... someone who is perhaps cold hearted and blood thirsty...
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Lol... I couldn't figure out what this was about, buit I found that it was Twilight James, and just laughed and laughed. Very entertaining.
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Thank you ever so much.You did a wonderful job and I enjoyed reading this poem.Great job and good luck in my contest.
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Lmao I never read the Twilight series nor shall I anyday soon but roflmao I like this Tanka from ya. what I love bout this form of poetry is that they are like Haiku's but short sweet n easy to read and you can pack so much into em. anyways love your write here because man girlie its a freakin aweosme write from ya. so clever and yet full of depth and beauty as well. I love the way you penned this and LOL it felt like we were like eight in the book reading all this taking place. anyways awesome write and bes tof luck in the contest to ya bestie
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' for ya da only and only Fav whitetiger Pauly 
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it doesnt suprise me that you'd never read it, its too girly
thank you ever so much for the comment, and stay safe, my precious white tiger 
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