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My Little Wiggly Butts

They say one is too much,

But I have four.

As soon as I hit the door...

I hit the floor

Attacked by slobbery kisses.

And each one wishes

That in my hand, I held a treat.

All are on beat

Wagging their little nub tails.

Leaving behind trails

Of mud

And crud...

All are fighting like kids for my affection.

But what really gets my attention...

Is when they slide accross the floor like a big klutz.

I then say: I missed you too my little wiggly butts!

 

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Yes, these are my babies. Starting from top to bottom in the last picture is Storm, Sir Bison, Dakota, and Madame Rouge

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  • xochocoholicxo
    July 23
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    awwwwwwwww i love it it is sooo cute i think you should definetley win


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 23

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    Awww, they are soooo adorable!!! I wish I had some little wiggly butts of my own lol! Nice quirky write. Good luck in the contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    July 23

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    Awhhhhhhh. I loved this poem. It was cuuuute. . I like that you made a poem out of how your pets act. It was really cute.


    Awwwwh.

    Thanks for entering.
    Good luck on the contest.



    -Dogtagz


    • Poetrist
      July 23
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      Thank you. People dont write about their dogs that much. So.. I thought why not


  • WuzGood
    July 17
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    lol, this is funny, i like this and i love dogs, nice write!!


    • Poetrist
      July 17
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      Thank you. And thanks or actually taking the time to read through some of my stuff.

  • piccola silver member
    July 17

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    whenever I see jaws like that I immediately think of slobber. Handsome dogs though and thank you for entering.


  • Gypsy Via Orleans
    July 10

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    This is too cute. I just love dogs.
    My baby's name is LaBelle.
    She's a two year old German Shepherd.
    And she's rotten to the core as I imagine your babies are.
    This is a sweet dedication you've given them. They give us so much while asking for little in return. Good luck in the contest.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 9

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    aaww..

    they're really cute..and look very big! l.o.l. i'd say you have your hands full!! wow..don't look as if anyone's gonna mess with their 'mama' either huh?? this is a sweet and short story, but it speaks loudly about your love for animals, these in particular..

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