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Hallway

I walk through the hallway so silent so eerie
It made me feel scared it made me feel weary

Though I was scared I kept walking on
As I sang to myself this song

No matter dangerous the adventure may be
You will get through eventually

Just keeping going on
And sing this song
No harm will hurt you
Nothing shall be wrong

No matter how hard the task is to do
You can do it you will pull through

Just keeping going on
And sing this song
No harm will hurt you
Nothing shall be wrong

Don't be scared don't be shy
Just get it over with just try just try

Just keeping going on
And sing this song
No harm will hurt you
Nothing shall be wrong

Then I walked to the end
And thanks I did send
To that song
That told me to go on

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  • Silver-moon
    August 8
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    Thank ya!


  • dutch2lips gold member
    July 28
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    a sweet write, thank you for entering

  • Silver-moon
    July 19
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    Thank - you

  • emotioanl X

  • Silver-moon
    July 11
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    Thanks glad you like it

  • I really liked this.
    My friend I'll let her say
    what she thinks of it.

    Hey,
    I just want to say this
    was an amazing poem.
    I liked how you repeated
    "Just keeping going on
    And sing this song
    No harm will hurt you
    Nothing shall be wrong"

    It really made me think.

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