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you were everything to me,

i loved you
a young girl aronund 15, was in love with her boyfriend,
they had been dating for 6 months now,
her boyfriend usually called her everyday after school,
today he didnt,
she thought maybe he got held up,
she decided to walk down to his house,
saw his car in the driveway, 
she knocked on the door, no one answered,
she decided to just walk in like anyother day,
she walked down to his room and herd a girl ,
she opened the door already knowing to herself what was happening,
she cracked it open just enough to peek in,
laying there, on his bed with him, was another girl.
kissing and touching eachother all over,
the young girl ran home, crying her eyes out, mascara leaking down her cheeks,
she ran through her front door, into the kitchen grabbed the butcher knife,
ran into her room slammed the door and locked it behind her,
she turned on her stero as loud as it would go,
put the knife in her hand, held out her wrist, and put the cold blade onto her skin,
slid it right across deep into her skin,
blood started dripping off of her wrist onto the floor,
she grabbed a piece of paper and a sharpie,
 and wrote this:
dear boy, i saw you with her, was every word you told me a lie,
every word that came out of your fucking mouth, was it a lie?
the six months that we shared, were the wasted on bullshit lies,
if you wouldve seen the look in my eyes, it wouldve made you want to die,
i hope this note makes you cry, and want to die .
and now you can have that girl,
beuase this is the last time you will hear from me,
goodbye.
 
After she wrote the note, she took the knife, and stapped her self repededtly in the heart. 

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  • Holy Crap dude!!!

    Aww...powerful write here. Loved it. It's written different to how a situation like this is usually written. Keep up the writes! xoxo

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  • Tzipora
    July 9
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    blunt write. its powerful.
    - good write.


  • rhiley
    July 9

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    wow. yes, very intense, but very sad. I am such a dreamer that I hope that love would overcome, but boys are dumb! =)

  • wow this is really intense. i could feel the hurt an the rage and the broken betrayal in it. awesome!