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Unforgivable

How do you become that person?
Unforgivable
How do things just happen?
Unforgivable
Can you become anything but
Unforgivable?
Can we move on?
Unforgivable
Does the past ever become less
Unforgivable
Will I ever be anything else in your eyes, or am I just
Unforgivable
What is the path back from
Unforgivable
When I look in the mirror I see
Unforgivable
Sins of a life time
Unforgivable
Lost love
Unforgivable
Giving into temptation
Unforgivable
My life has become
Unforgivable!

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  • BrightEyd Anarchist
    September 20

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    Wow. This should be made into a song. I was picturing you singing it to hard rock music for some reason. It sounds like it can be a rock song to me. Anyway, I like the rhythm of it and I am blown away at how good and relatable it is. Hope you are feeling better soon!