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just be

tomorrow is a promise I can give you
but I swear nothing about next year
and as much as I panic over the future
I cannot guarantee that these arms
will want to hold you anymore,
or that my body will respond
so rapidly to you in 2012.

I daydream of forever
but it isn't a word humans
can aspire to.
I have worried over
whether you will want me
in 10 years or 50,
but today
let's just be here.

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