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My Darkest Desires...

You ask of me,
''What are your darkest desires?''

And I answer,
leaving you breathless,
and whimpering,
begging and pleading,
on your knees and wanting more.

My desires,
My dark desires,
My sweet elixer of imagination,
crawling across your spine,
sinking into your skin a touch so rough.

You ask of me,
'What is it you'd do to me?''

I answer,
My grip so tight,
a force so strong,
slamming you in to a wall,
''Make you bend to my every whim''

My desires,
My dark desires,
My sweet elixer of imagination,
crawling across your spine,
sinking into your skin a touch so rough.

Your words stutter,
as you look up at me,
My presense weakens you,
shivering from my touch.

''You asked me.
Now I'll show you,
You asked for this,
Wanted it,
Tempted me,
Now you'll suffer,
a pain so horrible,
but pleasurably soo good.
Beg and plead,
cum for only me,
when I say it..
when your told.''

With a briusing kiss,
I seal your demise,
stealing your words,
bracing you against the wall,
and crushing you from with in,
taking your innocence,
making it mine,
your suffering will finally gives in.

A shove to the floor,

a pull of your hair,

a rasp of a zipper,

a gasp of surprise.

 

The sounds of imorale pleasure,

begins to arise,

The sucking sounds,

the intense waves,

my cock in your mouth,

at the back of your throat,

your lips all around me.

 

A shove to the side,

as my load shoots off,

aglance at you,

as your lips qiuver,

battered and blue,

from the force of my thrusts.

 

Pinning you to the floor,

a movement can't be made,

Your soft sigh,

teasing as it can be,

Isn't what I want...

I want you to beg...

Say my name as if were to save your life...

moan it as loud as you can....with all your might.

 

Tempt me,

Tease me,

Fuck me,

Please me.

 

My thigh slips between yours,

A teasing delight,

one that you shall only feel,

when I think the times right...

 

A harsh grind,

a soft squeal of surprise,

a grand fuck to blow your mind,

belonging to me and no other guy.

 

I have your will,

I stole your words,

''Yes sir''

is all you'll whisper.

 

I have your body,

I own your soul,

It is I that fills you,

Bring you pleasure in every hole.

 

I'll tie you up,

Leave you there,

suffer and beg,

my touch bare.

Empty feeling,

Lost for me,

squeeze your legs,

wetness seeps,

burning desire,

anticipation,

you can't resist.

 

(Unfinished...for a reason )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




















 

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  • Adamastor
    November 24
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    A bit too enthusiastic.

    Dear Mr Six-Pack.
    First of all, you have the honour of receiving a comment from me, Adamastor, and that is a precious thing indeed.
    Second of all, I would like to ask about your quote about telling other men to "Leave off she's mine". Does the girl you seek have many admirers? Or are you already in a relationship but she's seeing a few too many male companions? Why do you feel you have to fight for this person?

    Another point I'd like to make is your picture. Is the six pack there to intimidate other males or swoon other females? I myself, hold a shape similar to yours, but my body has been toned for fitness, whereas you seem to have toned your body for vanity. I do not see the point in always showing off like that since more mature adults in the world see it as immature, pointless and down right annoying.

    The third point is the poem. I think at just 21 years of age you may have just crept into adulthood, and I think your words are (as I put in the title) enthusiastic. Judging by your work, you still need a little experience.

    The score I am willing to give you is a good score of 2 applause, however, due to the fact that I am new to allpoetry, I only have enough points for a score of one. Please take my comment and it's conclusion of score 2 as the actual value of this poem.

    Thank You and good luck in wooing the ladies.
    Adamastor
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  • Dryad Enya
    September 19

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    Breathless

    I'm wanting more, I think:
    'Pinning you to the floor,
    a movement can't be made,
    Your soft sigh,
    teasing as it can be,
    Isn't what I want...
    I want you to make me beg...
    Say my name as if were to save your life...
    moan it as loud as you can....with all your might.'

    Bahaha. I'm scared. Do it again, show me again i'm intruiged.

    Stunning as ever you never lose your touch.
    Dryad Enya


  • MaddHattress
    September 11
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    Just one word....

    Mine.

  • Talk about hot.....absolutely delicious
    love how the background kinda matches the topic ... nice job

    ~Betrayals

  • Kinky ^_^

    Delicate balance of control and desire. I guess love and attraction can be balanced. It's balance is the hand of the master ! Beautiful flow...cruelly unfinished


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    August 24
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    kinky my kind of forplay
    your gf must love you lol

  • This was definitely something fun to read at four-in-the-morning! Three stars for the generous entertainment!

  • Mmmm, very domineering and insanely steamy. However, I'd rather die than beg for anything, even if it is a cock in "one of my holes." I'd typically like to get this reaction from men, not vice versa...


  • alpPDCjr12
    August 1
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    awesome job...i like the backround too XD

  • To think a man can control so well, brings a smile to My lips. But this is just a small taste to that wonderful world known as BDSM, where both male and female summits to those that are of a stronger will. Your words hold some truth in them, yet they are also slightly on the tame side.

    Alphrodite


  • pepping wolf
    July 21
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    Shit

    That is sooooooo good you should write more of that

  • holy sh!t matt...

    woooow... daaamn, i need to catch my breath here... phew!
    amazing... hot & shmexy...
    u haaad to end it with a cliff hanger huh... u just haaad to...
    haha
    amazing

  • HOLY CRAP!!
    hold on for a second so I can wipe the steam from my screen!
    This was smoldering hot! You really are a bad boy!
    You say it isn't finished? GEEZ!
    In my opinion I think it is great the way it is.
    It leaves you wanting and begging for more.
    You said it when you don't submit to anyone!
    Steamy write!
    -Mandi *drools*

  • damn u and ur effing fantastic cliff hanger!!!!!! XD
    awesome! simply awesome Matteh

  • Effing Amazing Matt. :D

    This was hot beyond all hot. It doesn't even need the ending, I firmly believe in the saying 'Some things are better left unsaid.'
    Bravo Matt, you have hit a new high and set the bar.
    EFFING AMAZING- All I need to say.

  • finish it!

    finish it damn it finish it!

  • wow this was the best. I'm majorly turned on now and I think I'm wet Great write Matteh! So who were you thinking about when you wrote this?

  • Omg...I think I just wet my panties. God...that was..intense!!!! Fantastic write! If your into master slave kinda stuff, you should read my write called Love Doll. Its written from life.


  • Kari-chan
    July 8

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    *drools*
    OMG!!!
    This was so great
    I could see everything i nmy mind
    I had to read it twice!!
    Hoep you finish it soon

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