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time and distance


Sometimes I wander through the memories just to be a little closer

to you. Those times when there were no miles between you and I,

just a heart beat.  The days that filled us with awe at the discovery

of how it should be.

When we whispered our love to each other, worried that if we spoke

too loudly the gods would hear and take it away. We laughed at

emotions running rampant thinking how childlike we were. These days

were meant for the young or was it the young at heart?

I often wonder now if we have stored enough memories to keep

us safe. Knowing that our time together has been limited to stolen

days when the world was silent. We can never forget that distance

can shatter dreams if they are not held precious to hearts kept apart.

Don't want any more farewells, for they always brought us back to

the reality of living afar. Goodbye is such a sad word that leaves a

heart yearning and a soul in disarray.


Now as I cross off dates on this lonely calendar, I wonder how many

more will it take before there is no more distance only a heart beat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • I love this melancholy slice of romance...

    Isn't that the way love usually goes, anyway? Best lines:
    "When we whispered our love to each other,
    worried that if we spoke too loudly the gods
    would hear and take it away."
    Once again, a great write from your awesome muse!! Keep it flowing, Poet... I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a golden chalice, and wishing you good luck!!
    Loves ya,
    Cyn

  • Your emotions have such range here dear sister. I too am not a fan of "goodbye" as "farewell" has potential. Your words spill from a heart that remains in the confines of hope. Crossing of "calendar" days shows us how speedy time elapses. Distance happens because we are apart but on the spiritual realm, we are always together. Beautifully somber and heartfelt are these words. I wish you well in the challenge.


    Always ♥

    Renee


  • geckogirl silver member
    July 9

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    *sigh* full of emotions sis, you took and prompt and ran with it. a sad piece thats brings a hint of happiness... good luck in the contest love


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 9

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    Sigh Beautifully bittersweet, superb take on the prompt

  • I dip my mind into this like a bucket in a well... and I come up overflowing.

  • WoW1
    such emotions stirred in this brilliant poem Juls, it reads of regrets sorrow and saddness, but the strongest emotion is love...to give someone all that love and not to have it returned...then may Distance is the answer.

    I loved this babe you are a true deep writter who makes us feel the words.
    D. xxxx

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