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Losers Suck

It's Friday...
I'm in love.
The other days
will cure that.

Monday's blues
awaken
a yearning
for all new
batteries
to suck dry.

A rough trade...
Replenish
and keep me
constantly
draining your
arteries.

Forever
bleeding not
feeding your
wearied heart,
by Thursday
I'll be gone.

Either way
I'm always
as full as
a happy
tick.

Author notes

A take on the song. Co-dependents aren't soul mates or, as it says in the Boy Scout Handbook: "If you feel a tick crawling on you, brush it off."

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