Wait and bleed...
is all I can do...
It's like a vicious demon
being addicted to your
codeine type of love,
a bitter supplement to
my cold and darkened heart
You had a subtle demeanor
but I knew you were ready
to devour me, if only your
evil soul could be unleashed
Your reverie was nothing
more than a blood-lust
and relentless battle
in a bad dream
Once my wounded heart
found solace, you burnt it
to the ground and all that
was left was ash and
debris on the floor
Author notes
options: v. Wait and bleed- Slipknot
c) word bank:
- addicted
-demon
- dream
- solace
- ash
- debris
- bloodlust
- reverie
- codeine
- energy
-vicious
-devour
- demeanor
-supplement
-unleashed
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- & I tasted beauty when you told me I wasn't human in your eyes by Re-invention.
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great job
thanks, this was so good. i like the word bank... -
wow this is really good!
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marvelous.... well written daddy... loved it
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Strong. Well written.
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very well done with the word bank bro!
my brain wants to read found solace instead of was solace,
but thats just me. fantasticly done
best of luck!
Tasha
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wow, this is awesome!! word bank
I do not have the talent but you do
well done
Blessings
Rend
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