Another day, so ordinary
when I found out
that you were gone.
White wings lifting
you to up above.
A new star
has appeared in the sky
to remind us,
of the angel we lost.
Your flower has faded
never to bloom again.
I asked why?
I thought I had
so much more time
to say, to do, to love.
All for you.
So I'll sit here
and write them down
to tell you when I get there.
I know I'll see you again.
A contest entry
- A Tribute To Heather. by SimplyNoodle.
4100 points, ended August 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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awh this is a very beatiful poem, I love the form of this, and the way your lines are..very good job in deed. Id like to thank you for entering this inthe contest, and applogize for it taking so long for me to comment and finish up judging. I wish you luck in the contest, and keep writting.
Thank you,
chelsey. -
Welcome to AllPoetry
What a beautiful poem
The first line is warm and unique leading the reader to understand the atmosphere of this 
I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
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Loved IT!
I do like this one alot more please more!
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