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xXx downpour xXx

as the rain seeps through my flesh;
like acid, it does sting.
my corpse of joy...
now just a reminder of what was.
my body,
now a rugged dismemberment.
a decaying casket lay before me.
in agony i scream out my loves name..
my last thought, of his embrace.
in a flicker, reality kicks back in.
i am bleeding on the bathroom floor,
my blood srewn out accross the walls.
engraved and embedded,
my heart has sank.
my lungs collapse and my mind fails to function properly.
i ..... am...... DEAD!!!



XxXDEAD (a date with Death himself)XxX

the lightning srikes the ground with such force-
it awakens me from my sleep.
the darkened clouds surround me and i realize
that this is not a dream.
a nightmare, at the very least, has an ending..THIS does not.
my heart races faster...no, wait, i heart..i have not.....
to what do i owe this questionable affair;
a graveyard date with Death.
did someone do this to me?
or did i give up at long last?
i guess my thread of life did tear.
ive killed my dreams with such success,
and now i can see
this is not my future, my present, or my past...
jerking violently,
a skeleton hand grabs me;
it pulls with such graceful strength and beauty;
it stuns me with its glory.
so with morbid curiosity and a twisted sense of fate,
i am not inpenatrable;
but inpenatrable am i,
for i cannot breathe with no lungs,
and with no sense of emotion,
i dont have to hide.
i am in grave danger,
i can tell,
and this eerie night does weep.
i am dead,
this i know,
but i still feel the grasping at my feet.
im sinking underground;
im looking for someway out....
but for all its worth,
i guess tonight.....
i will dine in Hell.........

Author notes

this was kind of weird for me.........im not changing it though...i dont know what this is.....(?) well....this was just kind of abstract i guess..combining 2poems [neither of them sounded good by themselves]

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