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Mangled nursery rhymes

There there little one, have you any faith?
No sir, no sir, your far too late
None for the government
and none for my folks
and none for this system thats really just a joke

Tinkle tinkle, little drunk
please keep weeing on my junk
in the morning, I'll go nuts
and run you in, through the guts
tinkle, tinkle little drunk
-sorry dude your screwed

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  • williamstown silver member
    July 11

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    I love these adaptions of set pieces, and taking the Mickey of the establishment. more power to your pen.

  • mina nagi gold member
    July 11
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    hahaha... very funny... thanx for the giggles

    mina