looking back on all the thoughts that bring her back to you
her heart cries out for your touch
behind those eyes of happiness
hope keeps her up at night
waiting for you to take her home
our love held so high in that moment we looked into the love struck hearts
blow me away with a kiss but please dont say goodbye
blow me away with a kiss but please dont. please dont say goodbye
loving you
something i never meant to do
telling you
all the things worth dying for
you are my reason for living
sweety, please dont cry
this life has only just begun
you got my mind spinning at the speed of a heartbeat
im always with you. your with me
in our dreams to soothe the nightmares
hold me tight if it means you'll stay
baby, they'll never know how much you mean today
blow me away with a kiss but please dont say goodbye
blow me away with a kiss but please dont. please dont say goodbye
on the top of the world i will wait for you my love and forever
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Just tell me what u think, be honest! 
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Awwww I really loved your poem. It melted my
into a puddle. I really love your poem so much that I want to marry it but I can't can I? 
Forgive me I am really weird. I hope you do wonderful in my contest and thanks for entering too. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Wow...
i liked it!
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a nice romantic song.
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i'm assuming lyrics?
like i've said you've got to make it worth while to the eyes of th readers and it can totally be amazing. poetic devices work best, imagery appealing to the senses, metaphors, et cetra
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i love this! Its great
thanks for sharing
cya soon...
from E
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the one you love is very lucky if this poem is anything to go by.
good luck!!
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