I don't see anything bright
I want it all to be black
no red doors, please
The glamor girls walk around
in their fashionable clothes
while I am dressed in black
It's not fair, how the world
lies to us, and paints a picture
of everything beautiful, colorful
Leaving no remorse in my eyes
or a bitter joke of fake smiles
and pretty, flowery dresses
So, take all of the rainbows
and save them for some other
rainy day's aftermath...
...Paint it black...
A contest entry
- PAINT IT BLACK! by PrInCeSsOfRoCk.
1150 points, ended July 19, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nicely done.
I liked the balance of this poem and the way it speaks out but not in an overpowering way.
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great lil piece. think it was a good take from the prompt. specially liked the last stanza. nicely done and thanks for entering.
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Hehe, a very good piece here. And I have to agree with Poetic Tasha, it has got the song stuck in my head now haha
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Very good piece, keep up the good work.
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grrrr you stuck the song in my head now
evil boy!
lol otherwise great write and good luck!
TAsha
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