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A'irie's Life

A girl is born, born in tears,
left all alone.
No one to help her strive,
she is left by her own.

She grew up,
not knowing about her past.
Her childhood became womanhood
all very fast.

She met a sibling,
She was her sister.
She told her about her past,
it became a twister.

A twister of events
that brought them together.
They stayed by each other
through all of the weather.

Until a storm of death
took the sister's life.
And once again threw her world
into the pit of strife.

She met a girl,
bubbly and cute.
Who helped her life
to begin to uproot.

She met a man,
smart and handsome as can be.
And she lived her life again
and she was free.

~A'irie~

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Thank you, Mommy for helping me.

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  • Hun this is wonderful
    You have told the story, used great characters, and took me into her world.
    Love the lines to begin to uproot and into the pit of strife..
    See you can do it and you will do more and more
    Love u
    Mommy xxx

  • wow, im very impressed!! i dont think ive read any of ur poems in forever, so im surprised!! i love it, it's sad but u wrote it lovely!! keep it up cous!!

  • It's so...pretty. Sad, but pretty.