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That? What?

I am that.
What? That?
I am that, I am!
I am that i am.
That i am?
I am that. I am.
That? I am that.
That!
I am.

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  • anarchytect.ch
    July 8
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    What?

    u must whatch "the moses code" then! i am that i am, is actually what god said to moses, when moses asked him, who he was! and since then it has been gods name, but if u think that god is everything, then u are also god and exactly that u are, not more and not less! therefore if u fight with god, you actually fight with yourself! and that is what this conversation is about.


    • SteveS gold member
      July 8
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      Thank you so much for your kind explanation. I really just fell short of understanding. Knowing this gives the poem more to bite into. The point about fighting with oneself definitely fits the prompt. Thank you again.


  • SteveS gold member
    July 8

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    I actually read this three times, inflecting the question marks and periods to see if I may better understand this. Unfortunately, I failed in that regard. But thank you for your submission.