The wizen woman,
home after a long day, sits
and removes her shoes
Author notes
Written for a contest.
Prompt: rapture
<60 words
A contest entry
- rapture by Saffron.
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Comments
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excellent! awesome imagery with a pang of feeling at the end. nice work.
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Oh my gosh, I can’t tell you how many times I could not wait to get home from work to take off my shoes (and other things, but that is another poem, I suppose). This senryu hits the nail on the head, doesn’t it?
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with me—this is a joy to read.
Saffron
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