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Fifty Thousand Roses

Fifty thousand roses
Lying under me
I'm falling in an ocean
That's pretty as can be

Engulfing not my body
It's my soul that drowns within
I fought away these roses
Just to fall back in again

Tried to float a heart
On the surface of the sea
It got pulled in so quickly,
A big surprise to me

Knew that I was safe
Behind the safety of my walls
But didn't want to stay within
And walk those empty halls

I find I like to be
In your warm, embracing arms
I know that I am safe with you,
You'd never bring me harm.

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Written on April 3, 2009. Revised on May 18, 2009.

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  • Unbreakable3
    July 28
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    thank you for the entry! It was very nice!