Why do people bother?
Why am i still alive?
These are the questions i ask.
Everyday.
I still have no answer
None at all
People say they love me.
They all lie.
Why do peopel bother.
Im nothing dont even lie.
Dont even bother.
Im useless everyone agrees.
Friends lying.
Family lying.
Everyone is lying.
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sorry if it is crap this is my first one and my friend holly a.k.a xDemon Princessx
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i love it
i feel the same way
like why is everyone lying 2 me i no they all hate me so y lie
i aks those same questions everday
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You spelt people wrong, run the spell checker, and maybe think about a stronger form for it to be in,
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can i ask do u hate me or something dude. you have said that the poems you saw were well crap and i was just wonding if there was anything you liked about it and if you hate me or something coz i kinda seems like you do all my friends said that too lol they are so funny anyway yer tap back(that means answer i got that saying for someone amazing sorry im abit hyper hehehehehehehe)
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is gd
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sad and depressing message, but very good.
i can relate...
my single suggestion is to describe things better with language, creating vibrant imagery.
Really good start though, keep writing!
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1. peopel is meant to be people
2. this isnt crap and it is really well written and has a great message. I really like it and was the first one to read it.
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