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Down by the water, nothing but skin

slipped away with your horse

my sweet revenge

came walking to my place

Oh God help me please,

that sweet southern drawl is calling to me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • lingonberries
    August 31
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    The photo and the poem really fits together, it'a got a soft feeling! And I can sence the South!


  • Haygood gold member
    August 16

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    See if I get this right...

    He's skinny dipping, you comes down to get the horse and he has to walk up to the house to get it back because you are in love with his southern drawl. I don't know what you had to get revenge for but I hope you got his clothes, too. And I'm guessing that photo is taken on a Saturday...? Just a guess. Brevity of words..good job.


    • Rheea gold member
      August 17
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      naked on a Saturday night .. well yaehhh sweet southern drawl heat and country music turned down low start out by dancin with a lil white sun dress on hair all tied up in curls so he can take the ribbons out.. fresh from myaa bath uhhuh he always liked ribbons .. how do you people do it where you come from honey how ? mischievous grin at you.

  • dillpickle62
    July 29
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    Well...

    This little poem leaves much for the readers imagination to say the least. Sure put my mind right in the tank... I, I mean gutter. hahaha...

    • Rheea gold member
      July 29
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      ahhh a girl has to take a bath bursting into song... shameless

  • GordonR gold member
    July 23

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    There is "nothing but skin". It's all you've got. Your revenge should get a horse too.
    I don't know what you mean...but I enjoy reading your words, very much.
    XG


  • taylorndncar gold member
    July 22

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    A HALLMARK MOMENT...!

    i enjoyed this effort as well. your work is short and to the point, i like that in poetry. to me, that is real poetry...!!!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 14

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    Nice poem. Nice pic. You put a smile on my face with this one. I enjoyed it. It was just what I needed at the time.

    Mike


  • The Drifter
    July 8

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    A very enticing write that leaves the reader to mentally carry it on to the conclusion of their own chosing--clever. It paints the picture of a pretty lady stock tank which IS A great fantasy in itself. Then one of a hot lady with ideas to heat things up.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    July 8

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    All right thare darlin, Im here to sweep you off your feet and go dancin.

    Joe


  • An Old Codger gold member
    July 8

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    Ahhhhh, to be in that place of solitude once again. Free from worldly cares. Be careful though, those southern boys can talk their way outa anything. (or into anything. )


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 8
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    mmmm..

    this just 'feels' yummy.. nice lady..


  • ennovy silver member
    July 8

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    yeah it's something about that southern drawl that sends me...I like this photo it made me remember baths as a child...on the reservation....excellent write...novy

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