ladybug
last day of summer
no will to fly
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A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XLVIII - by Bear by Arkbear.
400 points, ended July 11, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats
Congrats on your trophy my friend.
Your write was penned wonderfully.I wish you well with your writing, may your quill never run dry.
Your friend in poetry,
Anne.
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Hello
I really have no suggestions here.......I do, however, believe it would have challenged you more to NOT use...*of*......or....*to*
Nonetheless.....I am satisfied with the way yours came out...
Good luck!
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I love haiku and I love me some Mally! Excellent work!
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A summer-ku with all the beauty of the season-I wouldn't want to fly away either. Good luck to you in the contest.
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thank you susie
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sighhhh...love it....this is like the perfect haiku on a hot day...and the little ladybug that just stopped by to say hello..and I wonder how long it has been flying...wonderful job!..i love it...wonderful KU...best of luck in the contest
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love how people get different views from my writings...some of them I never even think of
thanks for your kindness always...Im still trying to achieve that perfect ku
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Wonderful KU~
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thanks so much hun big hugum for you
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