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Its All Me

I want answers!
But you know I can't
Even ask one question.
How is it that I feel
Worthless by knowing?
Why does answering one
Only create more?

But
Truly

Its all me.

I laugh at absurdity.
I want to laugh
At the absurdity
Of my optimism.

Well . . .

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  • Whispers of Hope
    July 28

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    WoW very intresting certainly a very well written piece! I enjoyed reading it hope to check out some more of your work soon~


  • zoev
    July 8

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    good writing
    they stanza set up of the poem helps portray the message better.
    good language too
    rhetorical questions always help
    keep writing!