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Missing

Dont look for me, Not that you would.
Im far from gone, even if you could
find me, it would be useless,
Just forgive me, because im not coming home, not
now not ever.

Maybe someday you'll notice, though i doubt it,
You may wonder whats missing, if anything,
But never question, never respond.

So dont cry for me, not that you will.
Just forget about me, you already have.
Im not important, insignificant.
Would you die for me? No
you wouldnt, i want to know you love me.
Because im all alone, im Missing.

So ill bleed, yes ill bleed, I know
you dont want me to bother you with my "childish"
ways when really, i crave you're attention, just yours.

I wont sleep, cause i know my dreams will be filled with you're shining face. The beauty of you reflected over a midnight mirrage, And i dont think i can take that.
Or wake without you being right there, next to me.

 because now, im Missing.

 

And you wont ever get me back.

 

 

Author notes

..uhh... the prompt was "Im Missing".. so yah.. xD

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  • brokenhearts1219
    July 28

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    Its a good piece but I think that there are some improvements that could be made. But it is still really good and I liked it very relatable makes me want to cry knowing that someone else is feeling the same thing I am feeling all alone cuz u lost the one you cared about so much. And its good that no matter how much you still care the person wont get you back cuz it would lead to more pain. The more I am writing the more I like this poem = ). That silver trophy was very well deserved. Good job.


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    July 13

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    This is a a wonderfully written piece. A whole bunch of emotion and feelings. I can't say any part was a favorite for me but it was definately something I would say is a work of pen art.. good wor


  • xeroabyss II
    July 12

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    Makes you wish you never existed, so that you never would have had to die and wander this world as a ghost of who you used to be.
    I empathize very much with your words, having felt and wanted these things much more than too often through the seemingly endless moments and days and years.


  • Antebellum
    July 10
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    wow. this is amazing.
    thank you so much for entering and goodluck


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    July 8

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    omg this is beautiful, it reminds me so much of somthing I am going through this speaks to me so much waow. If I was judgeing this contest I would so give you gold this is amasing good luck not that you need it of course

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