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Life’s Gauntlet - Revistited

Life is a medieval gauntlet to be run 

with strong will, tenacity, determination. 

The gauntlet’s clubs and sticks 

are simply a part of life’s challenges.

Early in life the run is simple:  conquer childhood’s diseases, 

get through school, embark on a career, live life.

The gauntlet’s stones and weights are love, commitment, dedication.  

Middle age requires substantial confidence, trust, hope. 

Long life presents a twisted, tricky gauntlet 

of terrible tortures and trials, all roadblocks 

to success, peace, happiness, caring and fulfillment. 

Every challenge is faced with youth’s invulnerability.

The slow swinging pendulum of death’s dark 

blade, can not be avoided, it must 

be delayed, deceived, conquered 

with determination, optimism. 

Survival’s secret lies not in outlasting 

life’s challenges, not in battles won or lost,

nor in the joys and sorrows 

of life’s everyday experiences.

Survival in the gauntlet of life requires years of trial, 

error, learning to face one’s toughest challenges.

Each of us requires all the help one can summon. 

Life is ephemeral, tenuous, transient, temporary.

Author notes

Life can be an uphill battle for any of use. To some of us life seems a constant roller coaster ride or a swinging axe of challenges. The inspiration for this poem comes from my own personal, most recent views on life. 

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  • mcheadle
    August 6

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    HOODWINKED #133

    Some of seen to go from trial to trial. Something new each time. With the poetry I feel this is an escape, a plato, a stepping off where one can breath. Your poetry is so like life ~ it breaths and transports us to escape out troubles or where we have let ourselves be fenceed in. I have travled some of your roads. Mine was an easier path and i wieh the best for you and may it soon ease up to where your life is much better and easier on you. God Bless you and hold you close at all times. ...mac














  • Hoodwinked!

    Tenuous ans tenacious, that's what life feels like to me. I think you have a solid write, one that identifies the "gauntlet" and it's increasing difficulty as we age. Well done, poet!


  • Age of Rain
    August 6
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    Hood-Winked

    Your final line was my favorite

  • HOODWINKED !

    This is a deep ponderance on the living of life despite its obstacles and road blocks. One wise man once said life is not for the timid and I think your poem shares that sentiment.

    I think the metaphoric phrase Life is a medieval gauntlet is an excellent choice for this thoughtful discussion and I like the positive tone of this work. Life is often hard but it is worth fighting for! Thanks for sharing your words and wisdom framed in this poetic tapestry.

    You have been Hoodwinked by your Poetic Bandit Family today because WE CARE!

    Brother Dennis

  • I was absolutely exhausted after reading this poem. I feel as though I have been through another lifetime you so caught up the problems and vicissitudes of our lives. Beautifully executed.

  • Yes indeed life it an uphill battle every day at least for me. I have had so many uphill "challenges" that I am sick of trying to get through them. To tired anymore to even try but I continue on. This is really a great write you did a good job with this. Thank you for sharing it


  • trekkergirl
    August 4

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    nice. I totally agree with everything that you have said in this write. Life is a daily battle of trial and errors. Good job. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 22
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    Reading the poem again and it resonates with truth as we have had our challenges...You especially...Keep penning....

  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 8

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    Amen to rbruces comment on your structure, wisdom, and experiential words you have learned through your trial..This is a classic by you, as I know you are the voice of experience on such a subject.. penning dear bro...


  • rbruce gold member
    July 8

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    Beautifully constructed and written, my friend , and oh so true. To reach old age one must survive whatever life hands out, and carry on. There are no winners or losers. Life is but a stage and each must play a part.

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