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Time Flies

Just sitting in my room..
thinking of you..
Wondering why my carpets green and my sheets are blue

That time in your room
it was all about "us"
I never suspected it wasn't true
but i guess it doesn't matter too you

The clock ticks
and sand runs out
time flies by
without the chance to shout

An ocean separates us
but the same sun shines
i cant help it
i cant get you off my mind

Your face is all i see
as you promised you will never leave
then i woke up from that same.. old... dream

Where the clock ticks
and sand runs out
time flies by
without the chance to shout

An ocean separates us
but the same sun shines
i cant help it
i cant get you off my mind.

Author notes

This is one of my most recent attempts to write lyrics. Please give me some constructive critusisum and try singing it! thank you

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