It is sad to see that inspiration only comes while you're away.
However, I can gaze into your picture on my cell phone
for hours at a time, wishing to share but a moment.
Before you are forced away and I must resort to a single image.
Through this photo I delve deeper than thousands of words
I am taken straight to memory lane...
A lane that brings us back to each other.
Where my imagination takes over fact and precision
I am taken to my own realm where I can fixate...
Far from trivial disagreements, we ponder our next challenge,
awaiting a simple solution that should have been recognized.
Then I wake
and in retrospect, I realize we have much to work on,
but the test of time is easily aced...with love.
Author notes
idk what I think about this...but it's something somewhat concrete to start with.
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a most excellent write
the eternal question when love is separated by time and space, I think you handled thisone quite well,
I am taken straight to memory lane...
A lane that brings us back to each other.
Where my imagination takes over fact and precision
I am taken to my own realm where I can fixate...
Far from trivial disagreements, we ponder our next challenge,
awaiting a simple solution that should have been recognized.
a lane we all travel at times, really nice write
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poetic just is not the word
It pulled then hypnotized. love it to the max KillerRain.
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really good meaning/theme
poetry allows each line to have the meaning of thousands.
very good language and metaphors.
great foundation
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