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Fire of His Love

 

soaring notes vibrate

His greatness where feelings

expose His presence;

reaching deeper

than my heart

 

sounds trip through fibres

tenderly,  leaving prints

upon my mind

 

aches become awe

love, where His Being

sweeps my soul --

reaching  me;

 

my being kneels

in His presence; kindled

by fire of His Love



 

Author notes

 

In the presence of Jehova

By Terry Macalmon

 

Holy

Piano & Orchestra

 

www.terrymacalmon.com

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  • Night Hope gold member
    July 16

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    This is a lovely & spiritually-lifting piece, Frans. Congratulations on your win, my Friend. Very deserving, indeed.




    • FransB gold member
      July 16
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      Thank you

      I appreciate you stopping by. Frans

  • FransB gold member
    July 15
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    PK

    Thank you; you received fine entries, sure you had a difficult choice between gold and silver, as both are outstanding poems. Blessings to you. Frans


  • Peteskid gold member
    July 7

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    the history of music in the west revolves around praise, and even my favorite r&b has roots in black churches in the south, and big cities in the USA. So this is very appropriate here, for this theme: a song of praise, the mortal attempt at a majestic offering in faith. And as here, it can touch a person, deeply. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest, best of luck in the judging...PK