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Me And My Knife

Just shut up and go away
Don't come back another day
Just shut the door and leave
So I can continue to bleed
Leave me alone with my friend
My counseler
'Till the end
My favorite object
In the night
My knife

We spend hours in my room
It spends hours on my arm
It really means no harm
It is here to help
You say let it all out
Well this is my way
This is my angle on my life
My knife
This is my way to let it all out
Blood, tears, and all
I will continue to use this method
Until the day I fall

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  • xxMetteMadnessxx
    July 26

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    omg. i really really love this poem.
    and i can relate so much to it.
    i hope everything is ok with you though.
    and i know how you feel if you cut..
    and if you need someone to talk to,
    then im here..


  • orangepeeling
    July 17
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    so sad , I hope everything is alright.


  • XxMoonLiteAngelxX
    July 10

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    Stop thinking like this!
    UGH! :/
    It does not help at all!
    Stop feeling like this!
    Your making me worried sick!