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When I feel.....

When I feel the sun upon my face, I feel a warm embrace.
When I feel the wind upon my hair, I feel a loving soul in the air.
When I feel a beautiful breeze, I feel like I'm at ease.
When I feel your kiss, I feel a moment of bliss.

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