Sadism devours my whole
as I drag you down corridors,
& with the prick of a needle,
you're fast asleep.
Like a peaceful lamb,
your image grants a heavenly sough
& I nearly fall to regret
until the knife inches in and I feel the rush.
Screams
flood the chambers
& life takes an Auschwitz feel to itself.
Now a snicker
& the Eden eye melts to Hell's flames.
Ah, such glorious reveries to see you in death's embrace,
& to hold you there myself.
A contest entry
- Macabre Madness! by Miss Macabre.
750 points, ended July 7, 28 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In the house of mirror's she only seen horror by Ignis Corpus.
650 points, ended July 30, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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p: wow. powerful, you also did a great job with stanza's punctuation, grammar, and poetic devices, i have no negatives or suggestions for this piece.
thanks for entering -
I shouldn't say this...but this is gold.
Fucking automatically, lol. Congrats before hand!
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Oh?
Well then thank you before hand.
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Wow. The sight in it was quite scary in a way but so awesome in the other. It was a piece that reflected some hate, a sight that most wish to never see, and a nighttime to last forever. I like it.
Dax
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amazing
perfect for the contest and a wonderful write in itself. congrats.
-Spooky
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