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Promisctinuous

Unsuspecting girls
for lonely boy,
all their hearts
he will destroy.
Treat them careless—
like broken toys.

Stupid girls,
his lurid deeds.
Toss them aside—
they served their need.
Feed the void,
endless disease.

Shallow boy—
selfish acts.
Use them up,
then throw them back.
A lifetime spent
mounting attacks.

Broken promises—
lies he tells,
not strong enough
to save himself.
He is hollow—
an empty shell.

Innocent girls,
cunning boy—
a life envied,
but not enjoyed.
In the end,
himself destroy.

Author notes

Promisctinuous = continuous + promiscuity

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  • eastwind32
    July 7
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    Excellent write - great flow.
    The title evades me.


    • sxyvxn3779
      July 7
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      thanks for taking the time to read

      Promisctinuous = continuous + promiscuity