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Cut Cut

Cut, cut
You out of my life
Cut, cut
I know it isn't right
I try again to break this
But I can't
The blade will always win
Cut, cut
Because of you
Cut, cut
Sad but true
Cut, cut
Cut, cut
I bleed because of you

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  • Autophobia
    July 8

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    good

    yup, exactly how it is. Very good though, made me think about why i do it and yup you pretty much sumed it up


  • vampire blood
    July 7
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    you have a lot if eomoshin in you i like it good job


  • daddysgirl1
    July 7
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    WOW

    That was great and sad but VERY good job...