Brain-dead
Can't feel my head
Crying
Because of you
You made me numb
You left me bruised
And I felt used
By of course, you
Your fairytale is over
I am not your lover
Because I am wrecked
And I can't take it
Anymore
You wrecked my heart
You pulled me apart
I can't hate it
I hate you
Stop ruining my life
Stop breaking me down
Stop goofing around
We are not a game
This burns
We burn
Will I ever learn
To let you go
When I look in the mirror I see your creation
That led me to devestation
I see us
Or whats left
Author notes
M.i.d.n.i.g.h.t.b.r.e.e.z.e Words:Brain-dead,burns,fairytale,lover,numb,wrecked, devestated, bruised,mirror,creation
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omfg!!! I LOVE IT!!!
Will I ever learn
To let you go
When I look in the mirror I see your creation
That led me to devestation
I feel the same way....
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You left me comatose?
:/ I'm not sure I like the placement of the word there and the rhyming scheme is ehh...
And you only used nine words...
Edit and try again. You have nine chances left.
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