Once again she looked at the ring on her finger
Thinking that her man is more than a fairy tale
He is her Prince Charming;
Her Knight in Shining Armour
As she looks to the sky she sees a wondrous sight
Knowing that it is only seen about once every seventy-six years
She runs inside to get her love
Very excited at having seen Halley's Comet
She enters the house and sees them
Her Prince;
Her Knight;
With another woman
At this she faints
He hears her fall and rushes to her
"Baby!!" He screams
"My love, wake up!!"
He gently shakes her, trying to bring her back
When she finally comes to
She slaps him hard across his face
Tears start to fall from her ocean blue eyes
"Why...?" was all she could manage to say
He embraces her lovingly
"It's not what you think, I promise"
He grabs her hand and kisses it
"You see this ring, do you not?"
"Yes.. But.. But, I saw..."
"I know what you think you saw,
And it's not the truth. Babe, I love you,
I want you for my wife. That's why you have this"
He shows her the sparkling diamond
She looks at it and starts crying again
"I know you love me and that's... that's why I don't understand
Why.. why, is she here!! And why was she all over you!?"
He searches for the right words and then sighs
"She is an old flame, and she wants me back.
I told her to leave because I love you but she would not have that.
So she forced herself on me."
"That's what they all say.." she says between tears
"I know... Is there anything I can do to prove it to you?"
"I.. I don't know.."
"Babe, please"
She looks into his eyes, at his face
Wanting this all to go away
He holds her for what seems like forever
Then he leans down and caresses her face with his lips
She puts her hand on the back of his head
And gently pulls him closer, guiding his lips to hers
Such passion in one kiss says it all
The years pass,
It's now time for Halley's Comet to be seen again
Their seventy-sixth anniversary
Still so much in love
The two sit outside and look for the comet
It passes over their heads,
"Make a wish," he whispers into her ear
"I don't need to, I have everything I could ever want"
She smiles as he holds her closer
"Same here"
"Same here" he repeats, then kisses her head
Author notes
C r a z z y C a t
A contest entry
- &idon'tknowhowtolove; i get too tired after midday. by dieu..
401 points, ended July 14, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! That sure was a long poem! It spanned 76 years!! What did he do for a living? Did they have any kids? Did one or both of them go to college? Did they live paycheck to paycheck or did they invest in oil and strike it rich? Where in the world did they live?
I think this really deserves a part II, don't you?
Great job!
Encore...

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Lol, thanks. I'll think about that, we'll see what comes to my head ;-) lol. Thanks for the comment and the add

~ KK
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title: halley's comet and other shiny objects
and space out your name in the AN, like so:
q u i x o t i c .



