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Smoke

It starts with a little puff of this
"You Don't know what it is"
No you don't but it reseambles a cigarettee
"But that's not it"

Correct look its brown
"It's weed"
Breathe in... hold... let out
"Cough Cough I feel it... not"
Give it a sec
"Damn what the heck"

Room shakes
"Earthquake"
Nope that's not it
"Holy shit"
You fall
"That's all"

It can be the beginning of the end
"So I'd rather not begin"

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  • thoughtfuldead
    November 14

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    Me likey,

    I like this one a lot.

    My favorite part was the whole,

    Breathe in... hold... let out
    "Cough Cough I feel it... not"
    Give it a sec
    "Damn what the heck"

    Made me smile at the thought of someones stupidity in doing drugs. Drugs are bad! lol
    Great write BTW.



  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    July 10

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    Well no wonder, brown is for clowns, green makes the scene. Sorry just a little ditty from the days of haze. With "smoke" there often is no end, just apathy. If the folks hooked on weed did not have it to do they would just drink and chain nicotine into their systems. But that is ok because the gov't can tax it. While I no longer use illicit substances, I will not judge those who do, we all have to find a way to escape from the pain that is our reality, some choose to simply become numb. There is no escape.
    Peace


  • DeSiBoO14
    July 8
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    WeEd IsNt BrOwN...hAhA!!BuT iTs GuD u DnT sMoKe!!NiCe WrItE!!


  • white stone
    July 8

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    Brown? Wow...
    Anyway... good for you. If you can stay away from it, then do that. Many times weed leads to other things that can ruin a persons life.