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[Tragedy; Chlorine Seeping From Her Eyes.].

Tragedy; Chlorine Seeping From The Corners Of Her Eyes.

Never quite got the hang of it.



D.e.v.e.s.t.a.t.i.o.n.
Goodbye was a grenade away,
Laced with formaldehyde,
Baby let me watch you de-teri-or--ate.

Lapsed into a blissful state of
corrosive comatose,
withering away in my
numbered days.

Feeling oh so clad in my
pinstripe pants and my
dark-as-night overcoat.

Well sugar,
would you hold my purse?
And if you happen to shake it,
you'll be so sweetly detonated.

N-i-t-r-o-g-l-y-c-e-r-i-n.


I'm a sleeper,
oh darlin', dreamer.
Asphixiate me in
my useless state
of brain-dead splendor.


F.a.i.r.y.t.a.l.e
Lover,
Bruise my
already battered
body,
and erase the burns from my neck.

[Rope Burns Don't Wash Away.]

L-a-c-e-r-a-t-i-o-n.

Baby,
be my guardian.
Leave your loving contusions
upon my porcelain skin,
mirror shadows on my face
from your wandering hands.

[Good Things Never Last Forever.]

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  • irdefk
    July 9
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    Good job

  • I like yours sooo much very better, are you like me and hate your own poetry more than anyone else in the world does?

  • Savi honey, I know it's you. Your background gave it away :]]

    "Well sugar,
    would you hold my purse?
    And if you happen to shake it,
    you'll be so sweetly detonated.

    N-i-t-r-o-g-l-y-c-e-r-i-n."

    You're good to go!

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