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Godsend

It took me a while to write this. I took the option of writing anything on my mind. Hope you like it! ;D Its kinda long, sorry.

-Papamongoose

If you wanna be saved from this
And become a heavely figure
Bad things can be hard to miss
Growing up with the torment
Kids screaming, smiles gleaming
My mom used to tell me im a godsent
Nothing was ever what it seem
I never really knew what she meant
I was nieve and ungrateful
Pulled up my sleeve and became sinful
I'd give my momma a mouth-full
I find beauty in strange places
I wanna find beauty in strange faces
I understand the basics, and i write my musics
And i sing my rhymes out loud
I wanna sing for a wonderful crowd
And as i step down from the stage
All over the place, screams and love for me
I'll see what it feels like to be known all over the world
I'll never wanna stop, but once your on top
It'll rip you apart, cause thats when the crap start.

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  • I really liked this piece alot. It was really good! WOW! I just loved it. You make some good points at the end because you could at first be known by all, and then when you're known by more ppl, it will tear you apart, and change the person you were into something you're not. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!