Precious
and helpless
my dear little one, I hold you to protect you
To comfort you
So tiny, so perfect, so my heart and soul
One day you will spread your wings, but i will be there if you fall
Till then, stay here, cradled in my love
Where i hold you to protect you
A contest entry
- *~ Priceless in Palm ~* by Desire.
1221 points, ended July 11, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: To hold you
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
Woven Strengths: While reading Your words~ I kept getting images of a
preemie...and for some reason was getting reference to May~ and also seeing
a white unicorn- very Interesting indeed~ and notation of a Stallion...
the word: Stallion After reading again~ I noticed in the Line 6:
...but i will be there
also Last Line...
Where i hold you to protect you....
the *i* is not capitalized where in Line 3: the *I* is capitalized
I wanted to bring that to Your attention
And this may sound strange but was seeing a cantaloupe for some reason
Also a small book being opened- looked through- it appears to be like
an address book- or notebook Seeing a cross on a silver chain around
a Woman's neck too
Love the direction You took with this prompt
Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
One day you will spread your wings, but i will be there if you fall
Till then, stay here, cradled in my love
Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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