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Lettingg go ..

As im watchingg the rain..
Im thinkinggg of us..
What we had and used to be..
Then thunder strikes..
And hits reality..

I never had you..
It was never real..
You wernt true..

I never had your heart..
Now ive decided..
Its time to part..

Im lettingg go..
Forget my heart, im using my head..
Im endingg this show..

Im moving on..
To what i deserve..
This is over and done..

Second best isntt an option anymore..
And it never should have been..
Im closing our door..

So i smile..
Even with tears in my eyes..
This was just a trial..

As the sun shines bright..
The tears dry with the rain..
Letting me see the light..

Letting go of you..
I know i will be okay..
I can make it through..

Author notes

Gah. I will get over him.. ..x

5pm.. 7/7/09..

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