I cry my self to sleep
This dream i always have is suicide
i just wat to say
Emo doesn't mean u cut.
Emo doesn't mean ur gay.
Emo doesn't mean ur suicidal.
Emo is real.
Emo is people.
Emo is everything.
Emo is a label.
Emo is being free.
Free to b u.
Free to express.
Free to tell everyone to fuck off!!
Emo is just a word
we feel pain much more its like
your on your own
thinking why me
why this pain
its hurt so much more than you know
Emo Is Just uniqe
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my self -- myself
wat to say -- want to say
u -- you
ur -- your
b -- be
its like -- it's
your on your own -- you're on your own
it hurt so much -- it hurts
uniqe -- unique
I agree with the commenter below me. There's no excuse for using netspeak in a poem; not only is it lazy, it shows how little you care for your language and your own thoughts, and of course it looks unprofessional. You're 22. It's time to start typing like an adult. -
"ur"?
Are you serious? I just wrote a column about the importance of good grammar. Really, you have got to stop butchering the English language. It's "you" not "u." -
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stop this its the way it is
i have wrote decent poems as well you know
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omg this is amazing!!!!! this is like just how i feel omg i love it!!!!!
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thnk u hun
you a fantasic poet -
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thank us and u 2 lady i love this!!!
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That was so awesome i L.U.V this poem. Its good
I dnt see any flaws or mistakes.
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