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One-Thousand Reasons

If there are one-thousand and one reasons for you to leave,
and you've only got one-thousand to stay.

Then tell me how to find that last reason so you will be

Right here
In my arms
With me.

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  • Dmonik
    July 11

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    This is beautiful.
    It reaches out and grabs the readers heart.
    We always find a thousand reasons to leave, but sometimes, it only takes one reason to stay....
    Bravo

    'D' (Scott)


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    July 7

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    Aww, I second the first comment.

    This is beautiful... and it's such a change to see you write things like this.
    Now I'm wondering if I just suggested you weren't beautiful before?

    Great write hunni.


    • Ravenblood
      July 7
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      Lol. No, you said that its more beautiful from the things I usually write, which is true. And look at my other poem, I posted it last night too. And I thought I'd try another short one, they seem to work.

      Thanks for the comment darls.


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 7
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    Aww...

    Got to love ya Rhi...